The key components are here but we need to work on bringing out colours and details. To do this: - take the gradient off as it has washed the colour out of Josie's face - change the 'squiggly' font - it is a little too hard to read - centre and shrink the billing block and put the certificate and some production company logos underneath it - change the red font to a different colour; it could be a darker red or maybe white...
Liam,
ReplyDeleteThe key components are here but we need to work on bringing out colours and details. To do this:
- take the gradient off as it has washed the colour out of Josie's face
- change the 'squiggly' font - it is a little too hard to read
- centre and shrink the billing block and put the certificate and some production company logos underneath it
- change the red font to a different colour; it could be a darker red or maybe white...
Good start,
EllieB